David's 2nd Critique

The Last Will and Testament of Edward P. Unum David, I like the way you played with the names of your characters and the way you constructed the story in a will. I like the fact that Edward is giving away more money than he actually has. I also like the fact that he’s not giving his son anything, just a little advice. I like that this story makes you read it another time, because after reading it a second time you see the metaphorical concepts in the story. You were really clever with the names (Lady Libby, George and Martha, Sam, etc.). Alicia H.