Shelby's 2nd Critique

i should have taken an ambien Shelby, I like how you experimented with not using punctuation or capitalization in this piece. I also like that, since these are her thoughts, there is no paragraph form, or breaks throughout the story. It reads to me like a stream of consciousness. I like this piece and the way in which you used this type of constrained writing. I don’t think there’s anything to change about this piece. I defiantly think that you can continue by creating more journal entries from this same person or different journals from other patients of Dr. Mitchell’s.