Critique on "How to Make Friends"

How to Make Friends Gabrielle, I really liked how you experimented with the formatting of this piece! The format was my favorite part about reading this piece. This “how to” guide is very on point with how a brochure or plantlet would look. The topic of “making friends” is very ‘experimentive’ because most that’s not normally something that needs to be explained how to do. I especially like that you used illustrations in this piece—that really turned it up a notch! As I read this piece, I felt that the wording could have been a bit stronger when being sarcastic.