Monday, April 22, 2013

"Incident Report" Sara

Incident Report Sara, I like the different types of voices from the characters. I also like the different versions or portions of the story that each character gives to the story. As I’m reading this, I picture a reporter walking around the scene of the incident and having a bunch of people telling them the story at once, but in different ways. It does make the story confusing, however, at the end the story “Incident Report” portion clarifies the incident, its outcome, and the punishment. I really enjoyed reading this story and I really liked the dialect of some of the characters—I like the way in which you presented the different ranges of voice and language.

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