Weldon's 2nd critique

Conveniently Portrayed Weldon, I like the way you experimented with the story. You kept out the quotation marks—which for me was harder to know the difference between narrator and character at times (but that might be the point). I like how the story shifts as I read it—it made it unpredictable. I like the use of the footnote along with the switch of the female character’s name. When reading the story, it lead me to think that this story was a journal entry turned into a narrative. When I finished reading it I wanted a little more from the main character. However, my favorite experimental part of the fiction was the footnotes and how it kind of changes the readers understanding of the story. The switch from Lucille, to Margret, then back to Lucille is cleaver. Alicia H.