Elle: 3rd Critique

Here Lies Love Elle, While reading this, all I could think about was sex, lust, and being in heat. All of the descriptions you give about the interactions between the two characters are very sensual and lustful—in my opinion. I like the way you use color to describe some of the characters—my favorite from this piece, “I am greens and off-whites and a form of yellow; she is Lake Geneva blue and nondescript purple something-or-other” I liked that line; I repeated it three times: once to myself and twice out loud. I think that the formatting and some of the ambiguity in the piece is what makes it experimental.