David's 3rd Critique

Voicemails David, I loved this story. I like the three forms of technology (telephone/voicemail, texts, and email) that narrate the story. My only critique would be that I would have liked to have read the email that Ann received from Marcy. I like how you leave the reader with different images of Marcy their minds—is she just busy or is she purposely not responding. I also like how you leave their relationship open because the reader doesn’t know if they’re just friends or they may have been together. I think that you could make this story a lot longer because there are so many questions unanswered in this portion of the story between Marcy and Ann. Alicia H.