Eric "Conceal or Reveal"

Conceal or Reveal Eric , I like the way in which you play with gender/sex. We don’t have much of an idea as to what gender character One or Two is until the end. While reading, you switch your tenses, so in some cases we are reading the characters in future and other cases we are reading them in present. I like that you give the reader an ideal as to what might happen with the series of ‘or’s’ at the end of the story—they leave the reader trying to put the pieces of the story together on their own and they also give you room to develop more of the story if you wanted. I don’t think that it needs change, I really liked it—my only thing would be if you wanted to be more clear, maybe you should clarify if the reader is in present, past, or future with the characters, but if you meant to have that ambiguity then it doesn’t need any change.