Weldon's 3rd Critique

Thirteen of These Thirteen of These Thirteen of These Weldon, I like the way in which you play with words, especially the title of each section and how you incorporate that title or its meaning into that section of the story. Certain times throughout the sections, I read it as if these were the narrators’ ideas—the first thing that came to the narrators mind when they hear/read “A MEXICAN BLANKET”, “A FEW DIFFERENT ONES”, and so on. In the section titled “A FEW DIFFERENT ONES”, I liked how you added the extra space after “ . . . anytime these is a paper there is space” I also like, in that same section, how you used the line “a sentence is a clutter and a language” which is later a title for another section. The play on words and notions is what kept me reading the story. Alicia H.